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~ Soraka portrait ~

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Description

Soraka portrait made with pencil crayons
Image size
1840x2618px 1.41 MB
Make
Microsoft
Model
Lumia 640 LTE
Shutter Speed
1/100 second
Aperture
F/2.2
Focal Length
3 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Aug 31, 2016, 9:54:11 AM
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NightEsprit's avatar
Hello, I'm from ProjectComment 
I'm here to give feed back about what you've done :heart:

This drawing is absolutely beautiful, the colour of the eyes just stand out well out of the purple. Soraka's horn was very well shaded, I loved that bit the most. The hair needs more texturing because you've shaded a bit too lightly, it just looks very fragmentary. 
The nose shape is fine, but it looks messy when you only line one part of the nose, also at the side of both nostrils, it's different shapes and looks uneven.
I love how you shaded dark around the middle of the nose so you didn't need to over line it, otherwise it would look weird.
Although the eyelashes are a bit unrealistic, it still looks unique and pretty :)
I feel the mouth is to high up from the chin, but if I look closely, it's not, because you shaded darker to show the under-head (where the start of your throat is), the reason I thought the mouth was displaced is because you lined the under-head, which looks like it's part of the face.
Her pupils are very gorgeous, again, it stands out beautifully. 
The background I wasn't fond of, it was sort of boring.
To clarify, the shading is good, the horn is excellent, the hair was poor, the nose looked messy, the eyes were fantastic. I'd rate you a six point five out of ten. 

Great job!